You can check out Mad Kane's Limerick here, and see what her readers wrote. I'm not really much of a Limerick guy, but here's my offering.
A man who reported the news
His producer's direction refused.
"Suit and tie must I wear,
But for comfort down there,
Feets can only take ratty old shoes!"
Not great, but not too bad. I know Limericks are generally risque, but sometimes it's enough to get the rhythm and cadence.
I enjoyed your limerick and appreciate your mentioning my humor blog and my weekly Limerick-Offs. Thanks very much!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your Limerick, Nicely done :)
ReplyDeleteThat's a pretty good limerick. I'm terrible at them--or any sort of rhyming prose. My skill hasn't evolved an iota since second grade.
ReplyDeletelol- thanks for the chuckle
ReplyDeletecute limerick.
ReplyDeleteHow come I only find out now you write poetry? Geez, I am seriously clueless at times! I never go to your profile to get to your blog. DUH me! Off to read more! :-)
You know, you should post more here, Trav.
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